One day I was eating my nutritious food and then all of a sudden I was running for my life my legs were sweating my heart was betting at the max. I ran though a ginormous bush and then I got my antlers stuck in the bush I was trying everything to try to get out of that bush then when I finally got out of the bush I had a whole bush on my head.
this was a good story i have 2 stars and a wish i liked the part when he was trying to get his antlers out of the bush and when he started to randomly started to run and i wish that you would have used some speech marks to make it better
ReplyDeleteHi Malikah , Great Writing - love your detail.
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